(The plan is to check in every Sunday and tally up what I've accomplished, and add any new goals to the list. Feel free to jeer if I don't get at least half this list done this month!)
MAY GOALS LIST as of 05/02/20:
YOUNG DEFENDERS BOOK 1: Outline, 1st draft
Done -- Outline
Started draft 1
Tweak 4 published Commonwealth Universe novels
Done -- The Lady and the Order, Fever, University, Leap Ships, Aramar
CHECK IN NEXT SUNDAY WITH A NEW, ENORMOUS LIST OF GOALS FOR THE MONTH OF JUNE.
Sunday, May 31, 2020
Off the Bookshelf: THE NAME OF THE WIND, by Patrick Rothfuss
Audio Book
Audible
Book 1 of the Kingkiller Chronicle
Okay, I just have to start with, "Wow ....."
And not just because this was over 27 hours, and because of quarantine I just wasn't out, driving around, taking 2-1/2 hour trips to meetings, so it took me a month to get this book listened to.
This is amazing world-building, incredible detail, so much thinking went into creating the time and place and characters.
And it's frustrating, because after 27 hours ... the story is just getting started.
Our hero, Kvothe, is only 16, going on 17, in the narration, when this first volume ends.
Plus it's a story-within-a-story. Kvothe has been cornered by a scribe who realizes who he is, despite being disguised as a mild-mannered innkeeper in a backwater town, and the scribe has demanded his story. So Kvothe is telling the story, with many interruptions that reveal the world is facing troubled times, and danger and evil is finding even the backwater towns and attacking.
Coming-of-age, hero's journey, whatever you want to call it, Rothfuss does an incredible job, making his flawed hero real, making the listener care. There were times I wanted to yell at my iPod, "No, don't be so stupid. Don't go there. Don't do that. You're smarter than that." But of course Kvothe didn't listen ...
What's it about? So very much. Magic and loss, danger, adolescent stupidity, grudges, injustice, the struggle for survival, the creeping approach of ultimate, world-destroying evil, people doing the best they can, friendship ...
Wow.
Audible
Book 1 of the Kingkiller Chronicle
Okay, I just have to start with, "Wow ....."
And not just because this was over 27 hours, and because of quarantine I just wasn't out, driving around, taking 2-1/2 hour trips to meetings, so it took me a month to get this book listened to.
This is amazing world-building, incredible detail, so much thinking went into creating the time and place and characters.
And it's frustrating, because after 27 hours ... the story is just getting started.
Our hero, Kvothe, is only 16, going on 17, in the narration, when this first volume ends.
Plus it's a story-within-a-story. Kvothe has been cornered by a scribe who realizes who he is, despite being disguised as a mild-mannered innkeeper in a backwater town, and the scribe has demanded his story. So Kvothe is telling the story, with many interruptions that reveal the world is facing troubled times, and danger and evil is finding even the backwater towns and attacking.
Coming-of-age, hero's journey, whatever you want to call it, Rothfuss does an incredible job, making his flawed hero real, making the listener care. There were times I wanted to yell at my iPod, "No, don't be so stupid. Don't go there. Don't do that. You're smarter than that." But of course Kvothe didn't listen ...
What's it about? So very much. Magic and loss, danger, adolescent stupidity, grudges, injustice, the struggle for survival, the creeping approach of ultimate, world-destroying evil, people doing the best they can, friendship ...
Wow.
Saturday, May 30, 2020
New Release Sample: CONFESSIONS OF A LOST KID
When the tour
group of eight got to the second room off the restored lobby, which was the locker
room, something weird happened. As far as I could tell, I was the only one who saw
the green, glow-in-the-dark gas that seeped up through the cracks in the tile floor
and streamed out through the vents in the rusty old locker doors. I watched those
streamers swirl around for a few seconds. They turned into tentacles like an octopus,
except without the suction cups, and reached across the room to us. Nobody reacted.
Not even Mr. Wellington, when one of those tentacles curved around his shoulders
and flicked at his coat.
I was pretty
sure nothing was going to happen, because the greeny-glowing tentacles were transparent.
Common sense said they were just gas. Except would gas act like that? There wasn't
a breeze in the room to explain the movement if it was just gas.
One tentacle
wrapped around Mr. Wellington's throat, and he choked. I opened my mouth to scream.
The tentacles
vanished, just popping out of existence in silence. Mr. Wellington went on telling
funny stories. The men and women who had used this locker room, during different
phases of the factory's history. The different things that had been manufactured
here, depending on the economy or what was needed in the rest of the country.
Nobody else
seemed to have seen the tentacles, otherwise they would have said something, right?
Of course, I saw them, and I didn't say anything, so how could I be sure? The freaky
thing was that Mr. Wellington seemed to forget he was choking, the moment the tentacles
vanished. As if he hadn't really felt them, or hadn't been choking at all.
So what had
I seen, if what I saw didn't happen?
When in doubt, go to Mum and Pop. They investigated the really weird, after all.
Friday, May 29, 2020
The Adventure: SANDRA MERVILLE HART, The Story Behind the Story, part 2
Yesterday I shared how my Civil War romance, A Rebel
in My House, was born. Today I’d love to tell you a bit about my current
writing adventure with you. You’re welcome to come along, but strap in—it’s
always a bumpy ride.
You see, I spend a lot of time in the Civil War era …
while researching and writing my novels, that is. I have to research for months
until I understand what the citizens and the soldiers endured. Then I’m ready
to write the novel.
I’ve begun writing my next Civil War series. This one
deals with the spying that went on during the war. My research has been a real
eye-opener to these widespread and far-reaching effects of spying.
My three-book series is set in the capital cities of
Washington DC (Union) and Richmond (Confederate). Book 1, Avenue of
Betrayal, is set in Washington DC (commonly still called Washington City
during the Civil War.) The number of Confederate sympathizers living mere
blocks from President Abraham Lincoln shocked me.
Loyalties divided the best of friends—and even loving,
close-knit families. My series will show the harsh realities of a country at
war with its former citizens, igniting strong feelings and sparking tragedy.
Historical figures will pop in here and there in these fictional stories.
I had planned a research trip to Richmond and Washington
DC this spring before the country shut down. This has been postponed until the
museums reopen. Though months of research have already birthed my story, this
trip will add flavor and authenticity.
With a stack of research books nearby, I’ll keep writing Avenue
of Betrayal. In the meantime, I invite you to read my other Civil War books—A
Stranger on My Land, A Rebel in My House, and A Musket in My Hands.
About Sandra:
Award-winning and Amazon bestselling author Sandra Merville
Hart loves to uncover little-known yet fascinating facts about our American
history to include in her stories. A Musket in My Hands, a Civil War romance
where two sisters join the Confederate army with the men they love, is 2019
Serious Writer Medal Fiction Winner and a 2019 Selah Award Finalist. A Rebel in My House, set during the
historic Battle of Gettysburg, won the 2018 Silver Illumination Award and
second place in 2018 Faith, Hope and Love Readers’ Choice Award. Her debut
Civil War Romance, A Stranger on My Land, was IRCA Finalist 2015. Her novella Surprised by Love in "From the Lake to the
River" is set during the
1913 flood in Troy, Ohio. Trail’s
End in "Smitten Novella Collection: The Cowboys" is set in the wild
cattle town of Abilene, Kansas. Not This Year, her nostalgic story in
the "Christmas Fiction Off the Beaten Path," released in the fall
of 2019.
Thursday, May 28, 2020
The Adventure: SANDRA MERVILLE HART, The Story Behind the Story, part 1
This is the “story behind the story” of how my Civil War
romance set during the Battle of Gettysburg, A Rebel in My House, was
born.
Something
drew me yet again to Gettysburg. I knew a story awaited me. My husband and I
walked the battlefields. Ideas stirred when I found Tennessee troops with the
brigade who began the fighting on the first day. Nothing solidified so I kept
digging.
I
discovered fascinating history at the Lutheran Theological Seminary at the
Gettysburg Seminary Ridge Museum. Surely my story touched this place. After
spending several hours wandering the museum and surroundings … nothing. I
trudged on.
I
explored Gettysburg Museum and Visitor Center, Gettysburg Museum of History,
Gettysburg Railroad Station, General Lee’s Headquarters Museum, and The David
Wills House where President Lincoln stayed. I learned intriguing facts at the
Jennie Wade House, Shriver House Museum, and “The Women of Gettysburg Tour,” an
evening walking tour.
Ideas
strengthened. My husband and I walked the town’s streets around the “Diamond”—the
town square where women and children suffered a nightmare from which they
didn’t awaken for many months. Then we spent another afternoon and evening at
the battlefield.
Three
Tennessee regiments fought the beginning battle on July 1st. They
didn’t fight again until they joined in Pickett’s Charge on the battle’s final
day.
The sun
sank low on the horizon as I stood alone on Cemetery Ridge reflecting over the
expansive field crossed by Pickett’s Charge on July 3, 1863. Though the land is
peaceful once more, it still tells a story. My imagination soared while the sun
disappeared.
I had
to tell what the townspeople endured. What if a Gettysburg seamstress fell in
love with a Confederate soldier? What if they both made promises to loved ones?
Some promises are impossible to keep …
About Sandra:
Award-winning and Amazon bestselling author Sandra Merville
Hart loves to uncover little-known yet fascinating facts about our American
history to include in her stories. A Musket in My Hands, a Civil War romance
where two sisters join the Confederate army with the men they love, is 2019
Serious Writer Medal Fiction Winner and a 2019 Selah Award Finalist. A Rebel in My House, set during the
historic Battle of Gettysburg, won the 2018 Silver Illumination Award and
second place in 2018 Faith, Hope and Love Readers’ Choice Award. Her debut
Civil War Romance, A Stranger on My Land, was IRCA Finalist 2015. Her novella Surprised by Love in "From the Lake to the
River" is set during the
1913 flood in Troy, Ohio. Trail’s
End in "Smitten Novella Collection: The Cowboys" is set in the wild
cattle town of Abilene, Kansas. Not This Year, her nostalgic story in
the "Christmas Fiction Off the Beaten Path," released in the fall
of 2019.
Wednesday, May 27, 2020
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Tuesday, May 26, 2020
New Release Sample: CONFESSIONS OF A LOST KID
Miss Angela
came to the door as I walked up the sidewalk. She waved, and I looked back to see
Mrs. S sitting in her car, watching me. I had the weirdest feeling she was making
sure I actually got to the front door, like there was a chance something would happen
to stop me. Why would she think that? Divine's was probably the safest place in
the entire town, even including Oak Cottage with all the doors and windows closed
and locked and Miss Abby on duty.
"I imagine
you're just eaten up with curiosity over what Charlie and Rainbow sent me, aren't
you?" Miss Angela stepped back to let me go past her through the door. She
laughed when I just grinned at her and nodded and handed her the envelope.
She gestured
for me to follow her, and we went upstairs. Not to the second floor, to her apartment,
which I had expected. We went up to the third floor, and she pulled a ring of keys
out of her pocket and unlocked one of the doors.
"You
do know the difference between secrets that are bad for you to keep, and secrets
that are bad for everyone else if you don't keep them, don't you, Lanie?"
Miss Angela paused with her hand on the doorknob.
"I think
so."
"Not
that I doubt you, but…" She sighed. "Why don't you tell me the kinds of
secrets that are bad for you?"
"Well…
When somebody gets hurt, and they tell me I better not tell the teacher. Or Miss
Abby. Or you," I hurried to add. That got a twitch of her lips and she relaxed
just a little bit.
"This
is probably laying a burden on you far too soon, but I daresay destiny has already
marked you clearly enough." She got down on one knee so she could look me in
the eyes as she talked. "Say someone makes you do something that you don't
understand, but you know deep in your heart, it's wrong. You don't want to do it,
maybe it even hurts, but that person is much stronger than you, and they tell you
not to tell anybody. Maybe they even threaten to hurt you, or people you love, if
you tell anyone what they did."
"Those bad people can't find us here, in Neighborlee, can they?" I must have been scared. I know there was a queasy kind of sensation in my head and my stomach at the same time, and my voice dropped to a whisper.
Sunday, May 24, 2020
Update: GOALS
(The plan is to check in every Sunday and tally up what I've accomplished, and add any new goals to the list. Feel free to jeer if I don't get at least half this list done this month!)
MAY GOALS LIST as of 05/02/20:
HERE, THERE BE DRAGONS: AFV Defender Book 2 -- revision 2, revision 3, polish/upload for print
Done -- revision 2
I can see now I am not going to complete this goal. Will have to save revision 3, polishing, and uploading for print later in the year.
QUITTING THE HERO BIZ: Neighborlee Book 6 -- polish, upload for print
Done -- Polished, uploaded for print
YOUNG DEFENDERS BOOK 1: Outline, 1st draft
Done -- Outline
Started draft 1
Tweak 4 published Commonwealth Universe novels
Done -- The Lady and the Order, Fever, University, Leap Ships
MAY GOALS LIST as of 05/02/20:
HERE, THERE BE DRAGONS: AFV Defender Book 2 -- revision 2, revision 3, polish/upload for print
Done -- revision 2
I can see now I am not going to complete this goal. Will have to save revision 3, polishing, and uploading for print later in the year.
QUITTING THE HERO BIZ: Neighborlee Book 6 -- polish, upload for print
Done -- Polished, uploaded for print
YOUNG DEFENDERS BOOK 1: Outline, 1st draft
Done -- Outline
Started draft 1
Tweak 4 published Commonwealth Universe novels
Done -- The Lady and the Order, Fever, University, Leap Ships
Labels:
accountability,
goals,
updates,
writing goals
Off the Bookshelf: EVER AFTER HIGH, by Shannon Hale
Five Short Stories
Apple White's Story
Briar Beauty's Story
Raven Queen's Story
Madeline Hatter's Story
Ashlynn Ella's Story
These were 5 free short-shorts I found on Nook, introductions to Ever After High, where essentially the children of faerie tale heroines go to school and get trained to step into their mother's shoes someday.
All five of our heroines are preparing to head back to school for their Legacy Year -- where they sign a contract to take over their mothers' roles: Snow White, Sleeping Beauty, Cinderella, The Mad Hatter, and the Evil Queen.
Interesting concept!
Can't tell you much more than this because it would give away way too much of each girl's very short introduction -- kind of like the 1-minute teaser before the opening credits of the TV show start. And yeah, like an appetizer, to make you want to get the whole book and read it. "Just how is she going to get out of THAT situation?"
Apple White's Story
Briar Beauty's Story
Raven Queen's Story
Madeline Hatter's Story
Ashlynn Ella's Story
These were 5 free short-shorts I found on Nook, introductions to Ever After High, where essentially the children of faerie tale heroines go to school and get trained to step into their mother's shoes someday.
All five of our heroines are preparing to head back to school for their Legacy Year -- where they sign a contract to take over their mothers' roles: Snow White, Sleeping Beauty, Cinderella, The Mad Hatter, and the Evil Queen.
Interesting concept!
Can't tell you much more than this because it would give away way too much of each girl's very short introduction -- kind of like the 1-minute teaser before the opening credits of the TV show start. And yeah, like an appetizer, to make you want to get the whole book and read it. "Just how is she going to get out of THAT situation?"
Saturday, May 23, 2020
New Release Sample: CONFESSIONS OF A LOST KID
The celebrating
died down, as people ran off to get on whatever phones they could find to spread
the news. We didn't have a lot of cell phones back then. The Zephyrs hurried over
to where I was standing by my sled. Mrs. Z hugged me and apologized. They both laughed
when I told them I knew what was going on. We climbed on the sled and screamed all
the way down the hill. Mr. Z pulled the sled and the Zephyrs held my hands and we
walked up the hill together. We went down twice more, and then someone flagged down
Mr. Z to talk about something and Mrs. Z went to get hot chocolate for us.
Then the crimson
and gold figure that had been lingering on the edge of my vision attacked. She could
finally tower over me because she stood two feet up the slope.
"You
think you're so smart!" Sylvia shrieked. Her fists were jammed into her hips,
so it made the skirts stick out in the fancy outfit more appropriate for figure
skating than sledding. "You think it's funny? Those stupid, nasty, mean people
are thieves!"
Then she said
other things with words I didn't understand. I had to look them up later. They were
mean, derogatory, and even racially hateful. She picked on Mrs. Z for being Asian
and called Mr. Z a drug-pusher and a hippie and accused them of being liars and
Communist spies and dozens of other things she could only have picked up from the
so-called adults in her family.
Sylvia's arsenal
of nastiness did have limits. When she started in on her second round, I told her
she was repeating herself.
Interrupting
a Grandstone wasn't smart. It just increased their speed, volume and pitch, and
sometimes added spitting.
The really
un-smart part of the whole encounter was that I should have turned my back on her
as soon as she called the Zephyrs stupid. I mean, I had a sled right there and I
was on the hill. I could have just turned and sat down and pushed. By the time she
realized I wasn't listening, I would have been twenty feet away.
"That
is enough, young lady," Miss Underwood said, in that tone that was so calm
and disappointed, it was scary.
Most Kindergarteners
would have stopped short, frozen by guilt, knowing we had made our teacher unhappy.
Sylvia let out a shriek and launched herself at me. Miss Underwood caught her by the collar of her coat. Sylvia had strong legs and a hard push-off, and enough momentum to unbalance them both and send them into the snow.
Friday, May 22, 2020
The Adventure: JPC ALLEN, pt. 2 of "How to Describe Characters in Show Don't Tell"
How to Describe Characters in Show Don’t Tell
CONTINUED FROM THURSDAY
The "handle" is Terence O'Neil looks likes Rae's
idea of a professor, which invites the reader to think of their idea of a
professor. Then I add some specific traits.
Another candidate for Rae's father is the sheriff, Walter R.
Malinowski IV: “He was one of the few people I'd met who made me feel short.
Close to six-six, with biceps bulging like pumpkins under a rumpled button-down
shirt, he could easily become the next Thor if he grew out his blond crewcut
and added a beard.”
The "handle" is that he looks like Thor. Blonde
crewcut and his height and bulging biceps are the specific traits. Readers are
reminded that Rae is tall--maybe inheriting that feature from the sheriff if
he's her father?--and that she likes superhero movies.
The last candidate is Jason Carlisle, a businessman and a
member of the wealthiest family in the county. “Besides being fashionable
enough for a runway, Jason had dark brown hair, gel sculpting every strand in
place, and soft brown eyes that held a warmth I wanted to wrap myself in. If he
was a few inches taller and more muscular, he'd make a perfect Superman.”
The "handle" is Superman. Specific traits are hair
color, eye color, and being fashionable. Rae has brown eyes, so she notices
that trait. Her description also shows that she likes the man.
Throughout the story, I dribble in reminders of the
characters’ appearance. When Terence O'Neil is nervous, he rubs his beard. When
the sheriff appears suddenly at an abandoned house, "his massive
frame" fills the doorway.
In a future post, I’ll tell you about the sequel I’m writing about
Rae and the relatives, friends, and enemies she discovers in Marlin County,
Ohio. If you’d like to meet Rae and solve the mystery of her mother’s attack
and her father’s identity, follow me on Facebook, Instagram, my blog, or Goodreads, then
comment here. I’ll enter you in a drawing for a hard copy of Christmas fiction off the beaten path and
announce the winner on May 29. If you
win, you’ll get five more off-beat Christmas stories, including “Crystal
Christmas” by Michelle!
*****
JPC Allen started her writing career in second grade with an
homage to Scooby Doo. She’s been tracking down mysteries ever since. A former
children’s librarian, she is a member of ACFW and has written mystery short
stories for Mt. Zion Ridge Press. Online, she offers writing tips and prompts
to beginning writers. She also leads writing workshops for tweens, teens, and
adults, encouraging them to discover the adventure of writing. A lifelong
Buckeye, she has deep roots in the Mountain State. Join the adventure on
her Facebook, Instagram,
or Goodreads.
Thursday, May 21, 2020
The Adventure: JPC ALLEN, "How to Describe Characters in Show Don't Tell"
How to Describe Characters in Show Don’t Tell
One of my favorite novels is The Outsiders by S. E. Hinton. And
one of the reasons I like it so well is that the main character Ponyboy
describes his older brothers and the members of his gang in great detail. In
fact, a good chunk of chapter one is devoted to their descriptions. I've always
liked getting vivid pictures of the characters in the first few pages. It makes
the story come alive to me. But The Outsiders was written over fifty years ago. Today, those
kinds of lengthy descriptions would be considered poor writing.
When I wrote my YA mystery short story “A Rose from the Ashes”
for the anthology Christmas fiction off
the beaten path, I was faced with the problem of how to describe characters
in "show don't tell" without slowing down the story. I also had to
describe them from the deep point of view of my main character (MC),
nineteen-year-old Rae Riley. Those descriptions would not only tell readers how
characters looked but something about how my MC saw them.
I hit on a combination of mentioning a few key traits and
then a "handle", a description to sum up that character. I learned
this technique from Michelle. As the story progressed, I'd dribble in reminder
descriptions to help readers "see" the characters.
In "A Rose from the Ashes" from the anthology Christmas fiction off the beaten path,
Rae is trying to uncover the identity of her father and if he was the attacker
who tried to murder her pregnant mother twenty years before. Her late mother
said only three men could be Rae’s father. I had to make those three male characters
distinct individuals. Perhaps more than other MC's, Rae notices the physical
traits of the men because she's looking for connections to her own
characteristics.
I introduced one that is a professor this way: “Terence
O'Neil was my idea of a professor. Over sixty, balding with a closely cut black
and white beard covering cheeks that shook when he talked. He even smoked a
pipe.”
The "handle" is Terence O'Neil looks likes Rae's
idea of a professor, which invites the reader to think of their idea of a
professor. Then I add some specific traits.
CONTINUED ON FRIDAY
*****
JPC Allen started her writing career in second grade with an
homage to Scooby Doo. She’s been tracking down mysteries ever since. A former
children’s librarian, she is a member of ACFW and has written mystery short
stories for Mt. Zion Ridge Press. Online, she offers writing tips and prompts
to beginning writers. She also leads writing workshops for tweens, teens, and
adults, encouraging them to discover the adventure of writing. A lifelong
Buckeye, she has deep roots in the Mountain State. Join the adventure on
her Facebook, Instagram, or Goodreads.
Tuesday, May 19, 2020
New Release Sample: CONFESSIONS OF A LOST KID
I had decided
I needed to practice my kinda-sorta flying, to show Angela what I could do next
time we met up. I already had it in my head that just going up and down, or gliding,
wasn’t good enough. Maybe she could help me figure out how to fly like Superman.
I found a sheltered spot at the far end of the field where the older kids played
baseball and soccer, in the thick clump of trees enclosed by the fence encircling
the orphanage grounds. I rose as high as I could get before I got scared and then
hung there until the ground started to look a little fuzzy before I came back down.
At five years old, twenty feet off the ground was the equivalent of Mount Everest.
I had just worked up the nerve to try some sideways shifting when Kurt walked into
the little clearing where I was practicing, and looked up at me. Fortunately, I
was wearing shorts, rather than a skirt. Skirts were for church and school.
"You
hum really loud." He was grinning at me.
"No I'm
not." I was indignant, because I knew enough to keep quiet so the kids who
might make fun of me wouldn't see me.
"Yeah,
you do, but it's not the kind of humming that people can hear."
"That's
stupid. How can you hear it if people can't hear it?" I came down a little
faster than I intended and my knees wobbled when I hit. Kurt steadied me, and a
funny buzzing sensation kind of shocked me where his hand touched my bare arm.
"Like
that." He grinned wider, gray eyes sparkling, and rubbed his hand on the front
of his t-shirt. "It's okay, I hum too."
"Are
you laughing at me?" I had already run into the two chief bullies, Ricky and
Donny. They had overheard Miss Abby talking with another houseparent about my reading
ability, and came running to inflict their new nickname on me: Lanie Brainy.
"Nope.
We're superheroes."
"Huh?"
That was my introduction to the amazing world of comic books and superheroes and mutants and superpowers and saving the world.
Sunday, May 17, 2020
Off the Bookshelf: SECRET REMAINS, by Jennifer Graeser Dornbush
The Coroner's Daughter series
Emily and Nick are back, working another death investigation that turns very personal.
A skeleton is discovered at a construction site on the day of the funeral for Emily's father, with an oncoming storm threatening the condition of the site and remains. Nick is sure who the victim is even before Emily can call in a bone expert to help with the identification: Sandi, a victimized girl who vanished when they were all in high school. And Nick was one of the last ones to see her alive.
The investigation moves forward, despite small town politics and penny-pinching and high school stupidity and secrets getting in the way. Emily repeatedly advises Nick to pull back, put someone else in charge, and most important, get a lawyer, because he could be implicated. Especially when his letterman jacket is found buried near Sandi's skeleton.
With so many changes and questions, Emily is pressured from multiple directions to decide what to do next with her life, her career, her relationships. She makes some choices that once again put her in danger, and threaten her relationship with Nick, which is still being re-knit after so many years apart.
Whew! Satisfying ending -- of course -- and yet it leaves lots of questions about what Emily and Nick will do next, if they will be together, what kind of future they have, thanks to the choices they make as a result of this latest investigation. I sure hope there's more.
Emily and Nick are back, working another death investigation that turns very personal.
A skeleton is discovered at a construction site on the day of the funeral for Emily's father, with an oncoming storm threatening the condition of the site and remains. Nick is sure who the victim is even before Emily can call in a bone expert to help with the identification: Sandi, a victimized girl who vanished when they were all in high school. And Nick was one of the last ones to see her alive.
The investigation moves forward, despite small town politics and penny-pinching and high school stupidity and secrets getting in the way. Emily repeatedly advises Nick to pull back, put someone else in charge, and most important, get a lawyer, because he could be implicated. Especially when his letterman jacket is found buried near Sandi's skeleton.
With so many changes and questions, Emily is pressured from multiple directions to decide what to do next with her life, her career, her relationships. She makes some choices that once again put her in danger, and threaten her relationship with Nick, which is still being re-knit after so many years apart.
Whew! Satisfying ending -- of course -- and yet it leaves lots of questions about what Emily and Nick will do next, if they will be together, what kind of future they have, thanks to the choices they make as a result of this latest investigation. I sure hope there's more.
Saturday, May 16, 2020
Update: GOALS
(The plan is to check in every Saturday and tally up what I've accomplished, and add any new goals to the list. Feel free to jeer if I don't get at least half this list done this month!)
MAY GOALS LIST as of 05/02/20:
HERE, THERE BE DRAGONS: AFV Defender Book 2 -- revision 2, revision 3, polish/upload for print
2/3 of the way through revision 2
QUITTING THE HERO BIZ: Neighborlee Book 6 -- polish, upload for print
Done -- Polished
YOUNG DEFENDERS BOOK 1: Outline, 1st draft
Done -- Outline
Mt. Zion Ridge Press online conference May 16
TODAY!
Format 3 Neighborlee books for Kindle upload
Done -- Semi-Pseudo-Superheroes, Virtually London, Living Proof (that no good deed goes unpunished)
Tweak 4 published Commonwealth Universe novels
Done -- The Lady and the Order, Fever, University
MAY GOALS LIST as of 05/02/20:
HERE, THERE BE DRAGONS: AFV Defender Book 2 -- revision 2, revision 3, polish/upload for print
2/3 of the way through revision 2
QUITTING THE HERO BIZ: Neighborlee Book 6 -- polish, upload for print
Done -- Polished
YOUNG DEFENDERS BOOK 1: Outline, 1st draft
Done -- Outline
Mt. Zion Ridge Press online conference May 16
TODAY!
Format 3 Neighborlee books for Kindle upload
Done -- Semi-Pseudo-Superheroes, Virtually London, Living Proof (that no good deed goes unpunished)
Tweak 4 published Commonwealth Universe novels
Done -- The Lady and the Order, Fever, University
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goals,
May goals,
reaching goals,
writing goals
New Release Sample: CONFESSIONS OF A LOST KID
Warning: If
Divine's Emporium doesn't like someone, they don't hang around Neighborlee very
long. People who resist the "go away, we don't like you" sensation long
enough to become conscious of it describe it as itching powder under their skin.
If they dig their heels in and stay in town, they usually go kind of crazy. Not
a fun, genial, wacky old favorite aunt kind of crazy, either. The nasty, megalomaniac,
"the world owes me" mindset that deliberately picks fights over stupid,
worthless matters. If there was a Wikipedia listing for Neighborlee, and a definition
of the Neighborlee defensive effect, here there would be a note saying, “See: Grandstones.”
Divine's welcomed
me, though. I stood staring at the Wishing Ball, my hand firmly tucked in Mrs. Silvestri's,
just amazed. I wanted to get up there, and I was playing with the idea of using
my trick to get up to the counter for a closer look, when Angela walked into
the room.
I had discovered
my trick quite by accident, just a few months before. I was momentarily unsupervised
in the cottage, wanted a cookie, and didn't want to wait for someone to open the
cupboard and get it for me. So I climbed up onto the table in the kitchen and walked
across it to the counter. A logical progression for a nearly-five-year-old, right?
The problem was the four-foot gap between the kitchen table and the counter. I didn't
stop to think, I just took a running leap, like I had seen someone do on TV the
night before.
My jump took
me up to the top of the cupboards. I hung in the air for a good ten seconds before
drifting down to the shelf where the cookies sat out in plain view.
I could fly. Kinda-sorta fly. Not zipping through the air like a jet or a certain alien superhero. More like controlled gliding, or going straight up, hovering, and coming straight down. When I got older, that talent made it possible to get incredible photos. Again, I'm getting ahead of myself.
Friday, May 15, 2020
The Adventure: with author CINDY THOMSON: My Current Scribing Adventure, pt. 2
CONTINUED from Thursday:
And that brings me up to today. I just finished a new novel, one I worked on for nearly two years. When it’s polished and the book proposal is ready, I will seek out a new publisher. I could publish it myself, but I would like the support a big publisher can offer (having experienced that earlier with my traditionally published books). Maybe I’ll get another agent at some point. Or maybe not, who knows?
The publishing life is filled with ups and downs. Once I realized that, it was a little easier to go with the flow. In today’s environment, there are lots of possibilities for writers. While competition is tough, there are still plenty of readers out there. Traditional publishers, small presses, indie publishing, blogs, magazines … so many opportunities await.
One thing I’ve noticed while quarantining and observing social media posts from others is that this time of slowing down has sparked creativity in many people. Baking, painting, gardening, sewing, crafting, writing, making music … I hope you are doing something to get connected to your creative side because everyone has one. Do you agree? Keep on creating!
Bio: Known for the inspirational Celtic theme employed in most of her books, Cindy Thomson is the author of six novels and four non-fiction books, including her newest, Finding Your Irish Roots. A genealogy enthusiast, she writes from her home in Ohio where she lives with her husband Tom near their three grown sons and their families.
PRIZE DRAWING:
PRIZE DRAWING:
Anyone who comments on either post Thursday and Friday AND comments on any post at http://cindyswriting.com/blog/ will be entered in the drawing to win this nifty bookmark, to be held May 22.
Web site: http://www.cindyswriting.com
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/cindyswriting
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/cindyswriting
Pinterest: http://www.pinterest.com/cindyswriting
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/cindythomson
Thursday, May 14, 2020
The Adventure: with author CINDY THOMSON: My Current Scribing Adventure
Hello!
I’m happy you stopped by to hear my wee tale. I call it my
current adventure because after almost twenty years of writing for publication
(not counting the years I just made up stories just for my own amusement) I
have learned that the writing journey is ever changing.
For me, it started with my interest in researching my family
roots. I started as a teenager collecting names and dates from the oldest
family members at family reunions and by writing letters. I wish now I had
asked for more stories along with those names and dates. Stories are the most
interesting part. I was fortunate to find someone who had traced one branch of
my family back to 1771 when the family came to America from Ireland. I was
hooked. Why did they come then? Why did they leave one daughter behind in
Ireland? What was America like when they came and why did they keep pulling up
roots and relocating across the new country? I couldn’t find all those answers
other than what the reasons likely were for anyone living at that time. So … I
made it up! That was my first adventure into writing fiction, a story that has
never been published but led to other things.
I eventually found an agent and then a publisher for my
first book. At the same time I co-authored a baseball novel that was published
by a university press, a completely different experience than publishing
novels. Then my fiction publisher wanted no more fiction. They did, however,
publish a non-fiction book I wrote. After that I busied myself by writing a ton
of genealogy articles for magazines. Then obtained a new agent, then a new
publisher and two published novels. Yay, right? But then one book by that
publisher was canceled. Eventually my new agent left me and I went on to
self-publish several new books (including the one that the publisher had
canceled, which some readers have said was my best novel thus far!)
If this sounds like I was doing a lot, remember it’s over
twenty years!
CONTINUED Friday
PRIZE DRAWING:
Bio: Known for the inspirational Celtic theme employed in most of her books, Cindy Thomson is the author of six novels and four non-fiction books, including her newest, Finding Your Irish Roots. A genealogy enthusiast, she writes from her home in Ohio where she lives with her husband Tom near their three grown sons and their families.
CONTINUED Friday
PRIZE DRAWING:
Anyone
who comments on either post Thursday and Friday AND comments on any post
at http://cindyswriting.com/blog/ will be entered in the drawing to win this
nifty bookmark, to be held May 22.
Bio: Known for the inspirational Celtic theme employed in most of her books, Cindy Thomson is the author of six novels and four non-fiction books, including her newest, Finding Your Irish Roots. A genealogy enthusiast, she writes from her home in Ohio where she lives with her husband Tom near their three grown sons and their families.
Web site: http://www.cindyswriting.com
Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/cindyswriting
Twitter: http://www.twitter.com/cindyswriting
Pinterest: http://www.pinterest.com/cindyswriting
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/cindythomson
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